Podcast Enterprise: S2E20 Return to tomorrow

on 2024-11-20

Space, the final frontier. These are the podcasts of the Podcast Enterprise. Its only mission: to explore story structures, to analyze our favorite characters and plotlines, to boldly talk what everyone has seen before

We will analyze all episodes of Star Trek: The Original Series or TOS for short using the following guiding structure:

1. Synopsis or summary of the episode
2. Story structure
3. Character analysis
4. Our likes and dislikes

The synopsis: When this episode begins, you have the USS Enterprise approaching a sort of destroyed class M planet, which at one point might have had Earth-like conditions. They’re approaching this planet. There seems to be some sort of distressing signal that they’ve picked up. As they come closer, they are faced with a lot of problems, and they also have to listen to this mysterious, disembodied, ghostly speaker that calls itself Sargon. He tells the Enterprise that he is one of the denizens of that planet, and it seems like he’s the only denizen of that planet at this point.

Kirk, Spock, and McCoy decide to have themselves transported down deep below the planet’s surface. There seems to be some sort of chamber that could support human life down there, and Sargon wants to meet them there, so they decide to go. It is also something of a compulsion for them to go meet Sargon because he apparently can control what’s happening in the ship, and he seems to be all-powerful, which is pretty frightening.

They find that Sargon is pretty much a globe of light. He’s a pulsing light within a plastic-type globe, and as Kirk approaches it, he’s possessed by the essence of Sargon. McCoy goes into a panic and tells Sargon to escape Kirk’s body because his temperature and BP are dangerously high. But not before discovering that whatever happened on that planet was some sort of cataclysmic event that took place 500,000 years ago. The people of this planet, Sargon’s people, were explorers. They had a big fight with each other and wiped themselves out. They also went off to lesser-developed planets and took part in their creation myths. This is a little confusing, as they seem to have been the source of the Adam and Eve myth on Earth, which is quickly dismissed. They were also the source of a creation myth on Vulcan, which Spock confirms.

What they want from the Enterprise now is to have the bodies of three people—Kirk, Spock, and Lieutenant Commander Ann Mulhall—whom Sargon commands to meet him using his telepathic powers. They also discover that Sargon was not the only alien on that planet. His wife, Thalassa, has also survived in her essence form, as well as a member of the rival faction. He calls himself Henoch. Against all common sense, Kirk and the crew decide to allow these three entities to possess them: Thalassa into Mulhall, Sargon into Kirk, and Henoch into Spock, which makes Spock grin as it’s a new personality for him.

From there, everything descends into chaos. These aliens have too much power. They haven’t had bodies in half a million years, and they want to keep the human bodies, pushing out the original personalities. Henoch, in particular, doesn’t care that he’s slowly killing Spock’s body. He even convinces Thalassa to do the same thing for a brief time. Everything goes haywire. Henoch wants to kill Sargon, take over the Enterprise, and achieve utter power.

In the end, Kirk as Sargon, Mulhall as Thalassa, and Spock (at least his essence) come together to defeat these alien forces. In a bizarre scene, it’s revealed that Spock’s essence has been stored in Nurse Chapel’s body. After Henoch is evicted from Spock’s body, Spock’s essence is returned to its rightful place. Everything returns to normal. Sargon and Thalassa share a brief romantic moment before choosing ritual suicide, being evicted back into deep space, where they die.

That brings us to the end of this episode. Thank you for listening to the Podcast Enterprise. Please do share your reviews with us and please share this podcast with any of your writing friends or trekkies. Live long and prosper!

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Podcast Enterprise: S2E19 Private Little War

on 2024-11-06

Space, the final frontier. These are the podcasts of the Podcast Enterprise. Its only mission: to explore story structures, to analyze our favorite characters and plotlines, to boldly talk what everyone has seen before

We will analyze all episodes of Star Trek: The Original Series or TOS for short using the following guiding structure:

1. Synopsis or summary of the episode
2. Story structure
3. Character analysis
4. Our likes and dislikes

The synopsis: When this episode opens, what you have is McCoy, Kirk, and Spock. They’re on this planet called Neural, and it’s pretty green, and it’s pretty lush. And These three are there to do some scientific experiments on the plants of this planet, because the plants apparently have medicinal value, and These three crew members want to collect samples and kind of develop them into whatever they can be developed into.

But as they are conducting their investigations, they find that the inhabitants of this planet for some reason suddenly have firearms. And as far as they know, this is a planet that is still in its primitive stages. So the civilization here hasn’t become a civilization and they are supposed to be in tribal societies.

And something has obviously happening. to them that they have suddenly got firearms, which is way too advanced for them at this point. And it is here that Kirk sees that one group of tribesmen with firearms is trying to attack another group of tribesmen. And he knows the leader of the other group of tribesmen and he wants to save him because Kirk apparently has been to this planet some 13 years back as as a younger officer and he has befriended this particular tribesman and he saves him from an ambush.

But while all of this is happening, Spock is attacked by an ape like creature called a mugato and apparently that thing’s bites and slashes are poisonous. While they managed to defeat this mugato, he saved his friend, but then that action actually brought them in sight of the other tribesmen, and now they get attacked.

Spock is shot, and they have to make an emergency teleportation back to the ship so that he can be healed. And while this is going on, Kirk is actually pretty confused because like I said before, this is not a planet that has had much development. They are also protected by the prime directive, which means outside interference cannot happen.

So someone or something has broken that and allowed them to develop firearms or they were given firearms as form of some sort of bribe. We don’t know at this point. They get back to the ship. Spock is in very bad condition, and we are also introduced to a new character, Dr. Nenga, who has to treat Spock.

And while and The thing is, now Kirk wants to go back to the planet and try and find out what is happening there and why they have firearms. So he, along with McCoy, teleport, transport themselves back to Neural. When they do that, this mugato comes back, the mate of the mugato, I think, or another mugato, I’m not very sure, comes back, attacks Kirk, and poisons him.

And now he’s in a very serious state. McCoy manages to contact Kirk’s friend and have him take him to the village on Neural. And the Apparently, this friend’s wife has some healing capacity, so she will be able to extract the poison from Kirk, is what we understand. And Kirk’s friend is now chieftain his wife is a very ambitious woman.

She comes back to where Kirk is being stationed. She heals Kirk and now she has designs on Kirk and then eventually you learn that she also wants her husband to be one of the most powerful individuals on that planet. This particular tribe does not have firearms her husband is something of a pacifist.

He does not want weapons and violence, but the other tribe does have weapons and violence, and she wants him to be like that so that the tribes are equal and he gets more power. Kirk, after he has recovered from the poison, somehow takes her point of view because it dawns on him that the other tribe has firearms because of the Klingons. It all gets pretty complicated as as the story progresses. Kirk manages to infiltrate the other tribe along with Spock and his friend Tyree. And they’ve, no, apologies, he manages to infiltrate the other tribe, They find that the other tribe is being given firearms by the Klingons, just as he has suspected, and then now Kirk is completely I wouldn’t call it influenced, but he is kind of swayed by his friend’s wife to kind of arm the peaceful tribe also with firearms and he begins to do so thereby breaking the prime directive.

And as this is happening, One event leads to another, and then It also comes to be that this particular woman, the wife of Kirk’s friend, is also something of a traitor. She wants power. She manages to steal Kirk’s phaser because that is the most powerful weapon she has ever seen.

First of all, she tries to seduce Kirk. When that doesn’t work very well, or it, something goes awry, she steals Kirk’s phaser. She goes to the other tribe, she’s ambushed by the other tribe, and then she’s killed by the other tribe. And this is, Her killing was actually the catalyst that brought about total change on that planet, because Kirk’s friend Tyree, now he decides that he will opt for violence as a form of vengeance and the episode ends there.

That brings us to the end of this episode. Thank you for listening to the Podcast Enterprise. Please do share your reviews with us and please share this podcast with any of your writing friends or trekkies. Live long and prosper!

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Podcast Enterprise: S2E18 Immunity Syndrome

on 2024-10-23

Space, the final frontier. These are the podcasts of the Podcast Enterprise. Its only mission: to explore story structures, to analyze our favorite characters and plotlines, to boldly talk what everyone has seen before

We will analyze all episodes of Star Trek: The Original Series or TOS for short using the following guiding structure:

1. Synopsis or summary of the episode
2. Story structure
3. Character analysis
4. Our likes and dislikes

The synopsis: When this episode begins, you have the USS Enterprise in a state of exhaustion.

Everybody on board is extremely tired after their last mission and they’re looking forward to some short leave on Starbase 6 and they’re on their way to the Starbase 6. Here, on the way though, Uhura picks up some distorted signals and with some sector coordinates. There’s also a lot of static with this communication, so she can’t make out what they are saying.

Eventually, though she does get through, and this communication is coming from Starbase 6, they want the Enterprise to change course and go to the Gamma 7A system where the Intrepid was last seen investigating. This is a Vulcan ship and something has happened to the Intrepid which the Enterprise must now investigate Kirk is a little reluctant to do it because everybody is so tired.

While they’re in the process of changing course, Spock wasn’t goes into a state of shock because he has apparently suffered some sort of a psychic attack where he has received mental communication of some kind from the Vulcan ship Intrepid, and it seems that everybody on board the Interpret has been killed.

And he also says, eventually later, much later, Spock also says that they were surprised by this death that suddenly, suddenly hit them. And this is a huge mystery. As the Enterprise goes to the Gamma 7A system, they find that there’s something or there’s something completely wrong that the system is dead.

There are no people, there is no life. And they also approach some sort of a dark zone, a dead zone. They can’t see anything. The stars are blotted out and it seems like a gash in deep space. They can’t see anything beyond it. They are not able to probe into it and they’re not able to see it except for this large void right directly in their path.

Spock has trouble trying to figure out what it is exactly and this irritates Kirk quite a bit. But, and as they approach this black zone, it seems that everyone is getting more and more tired. The engines are somehow losing power. There’s a lot of issues with the forward thrust because engineering has issues and the ship’s systems have issues.

And then finally Kirk, after a briefing with McCoy and Spock decides to send some sort of a probe into this dark zone. And by this time, the Enterprise has also entered the dark zone. So they’re losing power. They’re losing light. They’re losing energy. Everybody’s beyond tired and they need to be given boosters.

After some investigation, it is found that this dead zone is actually some sort of a shielding for a single cell creature, an amoeba-type creature that kind of creates a zone around it. It radiates negative energy and it leaches off the energy of anything that approaches it.

And It’s sometimes it’s also capable of killing off entire solar systems. And the Intrepid had approached this creature and it got killed in the process. It’s not actively killing the, um, it’s not actively killing anything that approaches it. And you just die. That’s what it does. And The radius of this thing is about 11, 000 miles, apparently, which is huge.

Both McCoy and Spock volunteer to travel into this creature to try and figure out a way to destroy it. However, Spock wins over McCoy, which causes a bit of irritation for McCoy. And we can talk about it. And He takes a shuttlecraft, goes into the thing to study it, and then through his analysis and studies of this amoeba, they find that they can actually blow it up.

The episode ends like that because they have to, they figure out this way, how to blow it up. They use a certain way to blow it up and you can talk about it. And as there is also some issue with the gravitational pull of this thing, because it’s drawing the ship forward.

They cannot break free of that pull. They rig an explosion, break free of it, move backwards, grab the shuttlecraft with Spock in it and his heroics and whatever jokes he has with McCoy, they grab Spock in the shuttle craft, they go back and this thing was finally killed. And that’s how the episode ends.

That brings us to the end of this episode. Thank you for listening to the Podcast Enterprise. Please do share your reviews with us and please share this podcast with any of your writing friends or trekkies. Live long and prosper!

Stay tuned in for our next episode! Enjoy!

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How to Write a Novel – Building a Strong Story Arc

on 2024-10-09

In this post, we’ll dive deeper into creating a story arc.

If you’ve been following the series, the steps we’ve covered so far:

• Write a one-liner for your novel
• Write the main story arc
• Create supporting characters and draft their motivations

Now, before we move into crafting arcs for these support characters, let’s first break down how to construct a compelling story arc. I am going to use Marlin in Finding Nemo. Oh, I so love him, what an adorable father!!!

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